The graph below provides information on the nuber of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.

The graph below provides information on the nuber of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.
The line chart describes the data regarding the
number
of
students
from America, The United Kingdom, and, Australia who studied abroad between the years 2002 and 2007.
Overall
, the
number
of US and Australian
students
fluctuated from the year 2002 to 2007. There was a moderate decrease in the
number
of UK
students
from 2002 to 2007. The
number
of American
students
slightly declined from 50,000 to approximately 45,000
students
between the years 2002 to 2004 but it continued to grow after that fluctuating to 50,000
students
. As for Australian
students
, they had a bit of a decrease from 2002 to 2004. And from the year 2004 to 2005 they gradually
increase
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to 10,000
students
and continued to stay approximately the same. The amount of United Kingdom
students
studying abroad has stabled from 2002 and 2003. But the
number
of
students
has gradually dropped from rudely 30,000
students
to just above 20,000
students
from 2003 to 2007
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