The diagrams below show the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram illustrates the production cycle of

sugar

from

sugar

cane.

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,

its

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a seven stages, man-made, linear process. It begins with growing the cane and ending with

sugar

drying and cooling. First of all,

sugar

canes

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cane

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needs about 12-18 months to grow, after that it is harvested manually by

hands

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hand

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or by harvesting trucks. The canes

then

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placed into a big crushing machine in order to make juice. Following that, the juice

has been

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purified using

limestone

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a limestone

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filter, which is evaporated using heat, where the juice turn

to

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into

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a

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apply

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syrup.

Then

, the

sugar

crystals

seperated

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separated

from the syrup using

centrifugation

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a centrifugation

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technique.

Finally

, at the

last

stage

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stage,

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the

sugar

crystals were dried and cooled down.