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The following two pie charts display the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 word

The following two pie charts display the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 word
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The two graphs
illustrates
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 the conclusion of a study into the most popular free time activities among grown-ups in Europe, between two different years,1985 and 1995.
Overall
, we observed that in 1985 watching TV had the greatest proportion,
while
 in 1995 playing computer games occupied the biggest part.
Furthermore
, other activities had the lowest percentage in both years.
Moreover
, a new action was found in 1995, which was playing computer games. On closer examination, watching TV was just around
one third
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 in 1985 and
droped
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dropped
 by 2% in the next 10 years reaching up to
one
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one-third
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third,
moreover
, talking with
family
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a family
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also
 declined by 11% in 1995 reaching
to
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7%, and eating
out side
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outside
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 had
also
 decreased significantly from, just below
one
 quarter to 8%.
In addition
, other activities
also
fall
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 by 4% in 1995 from 6% in 1985.
On the other hand
, talking with friends increased by 5% in 1995 reaching up to more than
one
 quarter.
Finally
, in 1995 playing computer games reached up to 27%.
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