The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
of people
who moved from rural to urban areas in three countries from 2000 to 2025.
In Iran
, the number
started at 8 million
in 2000 and began to go upward to 10 million
in 2005. Throughout the following years, the number
increased drastically in the later year of 2025 where it stood at approximately above 90 million
, making it the highest number
of people
moving. The number
of people
from Russia moving from rural to urban areas in 2000 stood at around 13 million
, afterward, the number
continued to incline until the year 2025 and it might stand out below 90 million
.
The number
of people
in Indonesia in 2000 who were moving, was 10 million
, and in the later years, the number
went slightly upward until it stopped in the year 2020 when it was 25 million
.
In conclusion, the number
of people
in Iran
back in 2000 was the lowest but soon came to the theory that Iran
will have the highest number
of people
moving. On the other hand
, Russia was higher than Iran
but it will soon decrease slightly in 2025. Lastly
, Indonesia was among the lowest number
of people
who are moving, but it had an upward trend until 2020, but it is still the lowest compared to the two.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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