The chart below shows what anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in the work after five years.
The below pie chart depicts the distribution of students in varied destinations from a particular university after awarding their undergraduate degree in
the
anthropology course. Correct article usage
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In addition
, the table displays the wage proportion of the Linking Words
graduates
in three employment sectors.
In general, the majority of former students entered the workplace Use synonyms
thereafter
their undergraduate study, Linking Words
whereas
the least number of Linking Words
graduates
continued their postgrad study Use synonyms
while
having part-time work. Linking Words
On the other hand
, Linking Words
graduates
who work within the government sector tend to Use synonyms
wage with
the highest salaries, Verb problem
earn
while
those working in private companies seem to have fewer opportunities to fall into Linking Words
this
category.
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According to
the data shown, it is evident that Linking Words
graduates
who became full-time workers account for the largest proportion, figuring at 52%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, merely 5% of all the Linking Words
graduates
had chosen to pursue their postgrad Use synonyms
study
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studies
while
carrying on a part-time job. The rest of the students either remain unemployed after graduation or apply for a full-time postgraduate course. Linking Words
Nonetheless
, a higher fraction of Linking Words
graduates
preferred to get a master's degree than unemployed about 4% more.
Turning to the figures on salaries, more than half of employees in the government sector earn ten thousand dollars or above, meanwhile, workers that earn Use synonyms
this
amount of income only constitute up to 40% and 30% respectively. Linking Words
Additionally
, private companies' employees are distributed more equally throughout the four wage levels.Linking Words
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