The chart below shows what anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in the work after five years.

The chart below shows what anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in the work after five years.
The below pie chart depicts the distribution of students in varied destinations from a particular university after awarding their undergraduate degree in
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anthropology course.
In addition
, the table displays the wage proportion of the
graduates
in three employment sectors. In general, the majority of former students entered the workplace
thereafter
their undergraduate study,
whereas
the least number of
graduates
continued their postgrad study
while
having part-time work.
On the other hand
,
graduates
who work within the government sector tend to
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the highest salaries,
while
those working in private companies seem to have fewer opportunities to fall into
this
category.
According to
the data shown, it is evident that
graduates
who became full-time workers account for the largest proportion, figuring at 52%.
In contrast
, merely 5% of all the
graduates
had chosen to pursue their postgrad
study
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while
carrying on a part-time job. The rest of the students either remain unemployed after graduation or apply for a full-time postgraduate course.
Nonetheless
, a higher fraction of
graduates
preferred to get a master's degree than unemployed about 4% more. Turning to the figures on salaries, more than half of employees in the government sector earn ten thousand dollars or above, meanwhile, workers that earn
this
amount of income only constitute up to 40% and 30% respectively.
Additionally
, private companies' employees are distributed more equally throughout the four wage levels.
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