The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The 2 charts compare road entrance into a
city
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hospital in two different years (2007 and 2010).
It is clear that
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the
city
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's infrastructure will change in three years. Generally, many people use hospitals in the
city
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, and the large influx of people
also
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played an influence on the hospital’s changes. Obviously, the 10% increase in the
city
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’s population had an impact and development on the hospital. In 2007 parking was common, both for staff and guests. There were 6 bus stops in the middle of the road.
Additionally
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, there is a ring road around the
city
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hospital.
However
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, by 2010, all infrastructure was changed. The parking lot was divided between staff and visitors,
in addition
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, the public parking was moved to the east from the hospital, and the staff parking remained in the same place.
As a result
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, two roundabouts were added on the south.
Finally
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, a large bus stop was built on the south-west side of the
city
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hospital

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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