The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The 2 charts compare road entrance into a
city
hospital in two different years (2007 and 2010).
It is clear that
the
city
's infrastructure will change in three years. Generally, many people use hospitals in the
city
, and the large influx of people
also
played an influence on the hospital’s changes. Obviously, the 10% increase in the
city
’s population had an impact and development on the hospital. In 2007 parking was common, both for staff and guests. There were 6 bus stops in the middle of the road.
Additionally
, there is a ring road around the
city
hospital.
However
, by 2010, all infrastructure was changed. The parking lot was divided between staff and visitors,
in addition
, the public parking was moved to the east from the hospital, and the staff parking remained in the same place.
As a result
, two roundabouts were added on the south.
Finally
, a large bus stop was built on the south-west side of the
city
hospital
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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