The charts below show the average percentages in typicl meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The charts below show the average percentages in typicl meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
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The pie chart gives information about the
typicl
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typical
proportions in daily meals of three different types of nutrients that can affect
the
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health if they
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consumed too much .
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, it is evident that Dinner has the highest percentage of
Sodium
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and Saturated fat,
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Breakfast has the lowest amount of added
sugar
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. at first glance, it is obvious that dinner has the largest levels of
Sodium
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at approximately 43 per cent .
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, Snacks and breakfast share similar shares of
Sodium
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at exactly 14%.
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,
lunch
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lunches
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have
a similar levels
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of
Sodium
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and Saturated fat.
On the other hand
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, Snacks contain the highest dosage of added
sugar
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at about 42%.
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, Dinner is comprised of 23% of added
sugar
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.other meals
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as lunch and breakfast
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have their share of added
sugar
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with 19% and 16% respectively.
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