The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce

electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture diagram below depicts the process of generating electricity
that is
suitable for human usage from geothermal energy.
Overall
, the production of electricity mainly consists of five distinct steps, which involve a variety of technological equipment, including injection wells, hot rocks, production wells, condensers, turbines, and generators.
Initially
, cold
water
from the surface is pumped down underground through a
4.5 kilometres long
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4.5-kilometre-long
tube from the
water
tank until it reaches the injection well.
Secondly
, heat from the rocks in the geothermal zone is applied to the
water
thereafter
arriving underground in order to raise the temperature. In the subsequent stage, the
water
is
then
pumped back to the surface by exerting pressure against the gravitational force.
Next,
the hot
water
is stored in a large tank functioning as a condenser, in
this
phase, hot
water
is converted into steam. Afterwards, the steam is utilized as the source of energy to power up the turbine to enable it to spin, where the generator is activated immediately, resulting in the production of electricity
that is
later on transported to urban areas for a vast range of usage.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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