The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in.five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in.five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
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The chart provides a comparison between the
differieces
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differences
difference
in house costs in five capital cities -New York, Tokyo, London, Madrid and
frankfurt
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Frankfurt
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- throughout the
period
from 1990 to 2002, compared with the average house
prices
in 1989.
Overall
, the data saw a considerable variation in
prices
for all cities. The
averge
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average
change in the cost of
acuiring
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acquiring
a house in Madrid slightly increased from 2% to 4% over the
period
from 1990 to 2002 compared with costs
1989
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in 1989
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.
In contrast
in
frankfurt
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Frankfurt
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, where the variation rate in
prices
slightly decreased from 3% to 1% for the same
period
.
Furthermore
in New York, home
prices
had shifted from a
negatively
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change (-5%) from 1990-1995 to a positive one (+5%)
form
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from
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1995-2002.
Similarly
in London, starting from (-7%) in the
period
1990-1995, growing to (+12%) in the
last
7 years.
Mean
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Meanwhile
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while
the home cost in Tokyo had a minor positive increase from (-7%) to (-5%) throughout the
period
from 1990 to 2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, prices with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • suburb
  • metropolitan
  • trend
  • appreciation
  • depreciation
  • residential market
  • housing bubble
  • real estate
  • economic factors
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure development
  • property value
  • inflation-adjusted
  • comparative analysis
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