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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The column chart illustrates the American individuals’ Fast
food
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 consumption ​​frequency from 2003 to 2013.
Overall
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, the data shows a drop in the percentage of
people
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 who ate at fast
food
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restaurants
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 every day, several
times
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 a
week
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, once a
week
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, or never over the 10-year period.
In contrast
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, there was a growth in those who visited fast
food
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restaurants
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 once or twice a month or a few
times
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 a year.
To begin
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 with, one notable trend is the rise in the share of
people
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 who eat at fast
food
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restaurants
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 once or twice a month. In 2003,
this
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 figure was 30%, and despite some fluctuations, it grew to approximately 35% by 2013. A similar increase was observed for those who ate at fast
food
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restaurants
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 a few
times
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 a year, with the numbers rising from around 15% in 2003 to roughly 20% in 2013.
On the other hand
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, the proportion of
people
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 who ate fast
food
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 once a
week
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 dropped significantly from 31% in 2003 to 27% in 2013. A decline was
also
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 observed among those who ate fast
food
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 several
times
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 a
week
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, falling from 20% in 2003 to 15% in 2013.
Similarly
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, the proportions of
people
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 who ate fast
food
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 every day and those who never ate fast
food
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 both decreased, each by about 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, people, restaurants, times, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
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