The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane, summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons were relevant.
This
diagram depicts the step-by-step process of producing sugar
from the sugarcane.
Overall
, we can observe that there are seven general steps for making sugar
. This
process starts naturally by growing sugar
cane and ends when the sugar
dries and becomes as like as usual sugar
that we use every day.
Initially
, the plants are cultivated for the period of 12 to 18 months, before being harvested. Then
, there are two ways to harvest them. Manually by workers, or by using special machines. The third step is crushing the sugar
cane with machinery until the juice is created. Then
, in the next step, the juice becomes purified by passing the limestone filter. In the fifth step, these materials are heated by an evaporator, until the juice converts into syrup. After that, sugar
crystals are collected from the syrup by using a centrifuge machine. And in the final stage, all of the sugar
crystals gathered in a tank to become cool and dry.Submitted by mahtaesmailian on
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