It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaivour to children?

It is crucial to teach

children

in the right direction at an early age, some individuals suggest punishment is a potential tool for helping them learn effectively,

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strongly agree with

this

notion. In the following paragraphs, the advantages and possible types of

punishments

will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

To begin

with, adequate

punishments

provide significant advantages for

children

. One of the key benefits is to be a powerful tool for parenting their offspring by reducing and eliminating undesirable behaviour

such

as lying, using rude or inappropriate language, talking back, ignoring and disregarding rules,

besides

it promotes the learning process in young people. With its effectiveness and understanding at any age, it become the fastest way to

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the right pathway for

children

in many households, leading

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them to

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afraid

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be afraid

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of behaving bad things and ensuring to

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a good citizen.

However

,

while

inappropriate physical

punishments

including beating with a rod or stick, pulling the child's ears, or rapping a child's head or emotional

punishments

such

as humiliating, ignoring and threatening can affect negatively

children

's development, decreasing self-esteem and inducing rude behaviour, appropriated

punishments

that could be helpful for young people and students are grounding, which allow them to self-thinking and accept a mistake. Another good discipline is an increase in chores, promoting housework skills and

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time

together with

parents. In conclusion,

punishments

offer many advantages for

children

and parents

such

as

a potential tools

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a potential tool

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for parenting, promoting the learning process and minimising undesirable actions.

However

,

this

could bring a negative consequence for their offspring by using inappropriate punishment.

Therefore

, choosing the right method for teaching by a teacher or parent could create a good model citizen for society in the future.