A glance at the provided pie charts reveal how many hours are spent in the library by undergraduates and postgraduates compared to all students at university of Britain.

A glance at the provided pie charts reveal how many hours are spent in the library by undergraduates and postgraduates compared to all students at university of Britain.
The information about
comparese
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comparison
of properties of undergraduate and postgraduate
students
to all
students
in British universities and numbers of
hours
spend in
library
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the library
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.
This
information
illustrates
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by pie charts .
Overall
, the dominant percentage of all charts is undergraduate
students
which
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spend
1to
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1 to
7
hours
in contrast
the least proportion is
same
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the same
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group spend more than 15
hours
in
library
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the library
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.
Students
spend
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who spend
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time from 8 to 14
hours
in
library
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the library
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amongst all groups have almost
same
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the same
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proportion
by
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of
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32%,28%and 35%
while
all
students
and
undergraduate
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undergraduates
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who spend 15
hours
has
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have
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lowest
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the lowest
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percentage .All
students
15 % follow undergraduate 9% .
On the other hand
rates for
post graduate
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postgraduate
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spend
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more than 15
house
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houses
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approximately half of
total
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the total
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proportion .
Percentage
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The percentage
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of
students
who stay in
library
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the library
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from 1 to 7
hours
for all
students
got exactly half portion
while
undergraduate
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undergraduates
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got more than all
students
by 13%
at the end
postgraduate university
student
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students
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have
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had
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17%.
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