A glance at the provided pie charts reveal how many hours are spent in the library by undergraduates and postgraduates compared to all students at university of Britain.
The information about
comparese
of properties of undergraduate and postgraduate Correct your spelling
comparison
students
to all students
in British universities and numbers of hours
spend in library
. Add an article
the library
This
information illustrates
by pie charts .
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Overall
, the dominant percentage of all charts is undergraduate students
which
spend Correct pronoun usage
who
1to
7 Correct your spelling
1 to
hours
in contrast
the least proportion is same
group spend more than 15 Change the article
the same
hours
in library
.
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the library
Students
spend
time from 8 to 14 Correct pronoun usage
who spend
hours
in library
amongst all groups have almost Add an article
the library
same
proportion Correct article usage
the same
by
32%,28%and 35% Change preposition
of
while
all students
and undergraduate
who spend 15 Fix the agreement mistake
undergraduates
hours
has
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have
lowest
percentage .All Change the article
the lowest
students
15 % follow undergraduate 9% .On the other hand
rates for post graduate
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postgraduate
spend
more than 15 Wrong verb form
spending
house
approximately half of Fix the agreement mistake
houses
total
proportion .
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the total
Percentage
of Correct article usage
The percentage
students
who stay in library
from 1 to 7 Correct article usage
the library
hours
for all students
got exactly half portion while
undergraduate
got more than all Fix the agreement mistake
undergraduates
students
by 13% at the end
postgraduate university student
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students
have
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had
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