The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart gives data on

divorce

percentage

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Sweden

and

Finland

in the period of time between 2011 and 2015.

Overall

although

in the

beginning

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Finland

's split

rate

was lower than in

Sweden

, in the

end

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divorce

percentage in

the

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Finland

surpassed

Sweden

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. It is

also

noticeable that

Finland

observed an upward trend despite

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fluctuation

fluctuations

while

Sweden

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performance increased during 5

years

However

divorce

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rate

Finland

constituted just below 40% in 2011 and after

slight

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decrease and

small

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boom, it made up nearly

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the same position of 40% in 2012. It is obvious that the minimum in

this

chart was seen in 2012 in

Finland

being nearly 33%. During

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years

indicator

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for

Finland

went up and outperformed

Sweden

in 2015 with their rates being approximately 41% and 37% respectively.

Divorce

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rate

Sweden

boomed in 2012 being 49% which was the maximum

among

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all

years

for both countries.

In addition

after 3

years

' decline

divorce

rate

for

Sweden

made up about 36% which was its minimum.

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The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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