The maps depict the outskirt of the town of Fosbury in the years 1980 and 2015.

The maps depict the outskirt of the town of Fosbury in the years 1980 and 2015.
The maps demonstrate the
outskirt
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of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015, and some major changes are reflected. One apparent change is a new roundabout in the
center
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of the area, replacing the intersections of the roads that connect all four major directions. On the west side, the old park in
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west was replaced with new
houses
, and a new park stood between the new
houses
and the roundabout. Across a street going from the roundabout to the southwest, tennis courts in the southwestern corner were converted into a sports
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with an adjacent car park, connected to the main road to its north by a small lane. More changes on the eastern side include: 1. The grocer’s shop and block of flats, next to the hotel in the far north end and lying along the main road stretching from the roundabout to the north, were demolished; 2. Terraced
houses
in the northeastern corner were torn down, where a
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with a carpark stood in 2015. 3. Across a street from the roundabout to the east, the large fields in the 1980 map completely disappeared, replaced by huge warehouses with a connecting lane to the main road to its north. In conclusion, more traffic and industrial facilities were added to the area, some residential
houses
/ flats were removed
while
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built, and commercial / recreational facilities experienced significant changes.
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