You recently did a short course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course : learn new skills Say how much cooking you have done since the course : made threelayed cakes, Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer - specialise in wedding course

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

to provide you

my

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overall

feedback on your famous cookery course " Delighted

Cakes

". I have completed

three

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month

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three-month

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crash course which is called Delighted

Cakes

,and I have wonderful experience with one of your

instructor

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,Miss Joan , She taught me how to bake multi-layered

cakes

in an hour .

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, I

also

learn

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how to make

gluten free

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cakes

, which would be amazing for me and my husband because they have

allergy

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from

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gluten,

thus

,

i

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can cook special treats for them now. After school , I

am making

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cakes

for my friend's birthdays

as well as

for my family every two weeks. I used my school notes in order to give

flawless

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look to my homemade

cakes

. I am thinking

to make

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of making

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my hobby

as

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apply

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a profession for weddings ,so

i

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would like to ask you about the Wedding Course .If any seats

available

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are available

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this

september

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September

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please inform me

immediatley

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immediately

, so

i

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can submit my application for enrollment. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Roopkamal kaur.