It has often been suggested that the reintroduction of capital punishment would deter the ever increasing rate of serious crime. What is your view? Do you think that capital punishment should be reinstated?

facing increasing

numbers

of serious crimes has become a major issue that tremendously

affect

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society. Many people argue that applying

death

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penalty will help to face increasing

crime

frequency. I strongly believe that putting strict rules as execution will be a

detterent

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deterrent

to any offender;

however

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there are other considerations that have to be taken

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consideration. On the one hand, most people are afraid of

law

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and

police

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.

That is

why putting strict roles massively

reduce

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the incidences of

crime

. capital punishment

not

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only a way to apply justice but

also

a frightening fate to any criminal individual who

addmit

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admit

admits

any heinous

crime

.

Moreover

, implementing capital law

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to make

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in making

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society safer and

cutt

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cutting

off

numbers

of

murder

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murders

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, child abuse, and sexual

harrasment

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harassment

.

For instance

, research conducted at Harvard University in 2010 showed that

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of murders in countries that implement execution

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less

by

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40%

than

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countries that do not implement

this

punishment.

On the other hand

, not all criminals should penalized with execution, as punishment has to be as dire as the

crime

. Many offenders may

committ

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commit

a

crime

due to

compelling circumstances.

For example

, a lot of murderers

committ

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commit

committed

murders to protect

themselvies

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themselves

from other offenders.

Additionally

, there are less

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crimes that should be penalized

with

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in

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other ways than

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sentence

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sentences

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, as robbery, verbal

harresment

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harassment

, and

fraudity

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fraud

frauds

. To illustrate,

prisonment

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imprisonment

is a fair fate

to

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those criminals,

also

engagement

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the engagement

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of those offenders in special organizations,

at

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where they will be psychologically prepared, help them to be a productive

person

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people

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in society.

To conclude

, modern

socities

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societies

have suffered from increasing

numbers

of

crime

rates, which

poses

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enormous negative consequences and

aquires

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require

immediate attention from governments. Death

statment

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statements

should be reinstated to deter those criminals.