The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented maps compare changes that will happen in an industry area at two various times( now and future).

Overall

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, it will be important that the factory and the places that are related to will be changed by residential places for living.

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the pictures, At the start, next to the pie walk we can see a factory and an empty region;

however

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, it will be altered by a parking area and Apartment;

additionally

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, on the other side of

this

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zone near Tone Lane we have Storage, Parking, and north-west section of the yard will become 3 and 4 bedrooms house. The graphs illustrate that offices, which are near Swallow Street and company, will be replaced by not only a Parking garage but

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, Privet roads.

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, the yard, entrance and reception will be destroyed owing to the fact that they will build three separate houses, having 2 bedrooms, with Communal gardens and privet roads, which get access to all types of houses and parking.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

167 words

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The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for companies and organization.

24.Good teaching is more important for academic success than individual ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write an essay with no less than 250 words.

Many people believe that companies and individuals should pay to clean up the environment in proportion to the amount of pollution they have produced. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some parts of the world, traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?