The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented maps compare changes that will happen in an industry area at two various times( now and future).
Overall
, it will be important that the factory and the places that are related to will be changed by residential places for living.
According to
the pictures, At the start, next to the pie walk we can see a factory and an empty region;
however
, it will be altered by a parking area and Apartment;
additionally
, on the other side of
this
zone near Tone Lane we have Storage, Parking, and north-west section of the yard will become 3 and 4 bedrooms house. The graphs illustrate that offices, which are near Swallow Street and company, will be replaced by not only a Parking garage but
also
, Privet roads.
In addition
, the yard, entrance and reception will be destroyed owing to the fact that they will build three separate houses, having 2 bedrooms, with Communal gardens and privet roads, which get access to all types of houses and parking.
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