You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the
number
of the
employed individuals by occupation type and sex for Australia in recent Correct article usage
apply
year
.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, in 5 of 7 job types
the Add a comma
types,
number
of men was greater than women. There was a significant difference number
of female and male workers in the types of managers, Tradespeople and Production.The unit was measured by 1000s.
Males
tended to be managers three times as
females. Tradespeople were the most significant difference, Rephrase
as much as
males
are 8 times more in than women, which was by 100 to 900. In the production field, it can be observed a similar pattern, in which the number
of female workers was 100 and males
was just over 500. Additionally
, count of employed women in semiprofessionals and labourers are
fewer than men.
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
On the other hand
, Female professionals are greater than males
, which is 600 and between 500 and 600, respectively. The highest number
of people worked as clerical compared to the rest of the job types. The number
of female clerical was also
greater than the count of men.Submitted by xxxx17
on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, males with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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