The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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employed individuals by occupation type and sex for Australia in recent

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, in 5 of 7 job

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the

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of men was greater than women. There was a significant difference

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of female and male workers in the types of managers, Tradespeople and Production.The unit was measured by 1000s.

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tended to be managers three times

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females. Tradespeople were the most significant difference,

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are 8 times more in than women, which was by 100 to 900. In the production field, it can be observed a similar pattern, in which the

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of female workers was 100 and

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was just over 500.

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, count of employed women in semiprofessionals and labourers

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fewer than men.

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, Female professionals are greater than

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, which is 600 and between 500 and 600, respectively. The highest

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of people worked as clerical compared to the rest of the job types. The

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of female clerical was

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greater than the count of men.