The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.
The given graphs
illustrates
the Change the verb form
illustrate
temperature
and average amount of days
with rainfall in two different cities namely Brisbane
and Canberra
.
Looking from an overall
perspective, despite the fluctuation, the temperature
in Brisbane
is always higher than Canberra
throughout the Change preposition
in Canberra
year
. Meanwhile, there are more rainy days
in Brisbane
in most of the months except for May, June, August and September.
A closer look at the line graph clearly shows that Canberra
and Brisbane
minimum Change noun form
Brisbane's
temperature
Fix the agreement mistake
temperatures
experiences
similar Correct subject-verb agreement
experience
trend
. The former started at 10 Fix the agreement mistake
trends
Celsius
degree
and decreased significantly to nearly 0 Celsius
degree
in August before recovered
back to over 10 Wrong verb form
recovering
degree
by the end of the Change to a plural noun
degrees
year
. The latter saw the same drop but from 15 Celsius
degree
to under 10 degree
Change to a plural noun
degrees
then
rose back to over 15 degree
in December. The maximum Change to a plural noun
degrees
temperature
in both Brisbane
and Canberra
started and ended the year
at over 25 Celsius
degree
, however
the latter shows Add the comma(s)
however,
greater
difference between summer and winter as it hit the bottom at 15 Correct article usage
a greater
degree
in July Change to a plural noun
degrees
while
the former’s lowest point was just under 25 degree
.
Moving on the bar chart, the figure for rainy Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
days
in Brisbane
decreased from 20 to 10 days
in the first half of the year
before quickly increase
to nearly 20 Wrong verb form
increasing
days
in the other half of the year
. Rain pattern in Canberra
witnessed a fluctuation between 10 and 15 of
rainy Change preposition
apply
days
each months
with July being the month with the least amount of rain.Change to a singular noun
month
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