The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

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the

temperature

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and average amount of

days

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with rainfall in two different cities namely

Brisbane

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and

Canberra

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. Looking from an

overall

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perspective, despite the fluctuation, the

temperature

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in

Brisbane

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is always higher than

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Canberra

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in Canberra

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throughout the

year

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. Meanwhile, there are more rainy

days

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in

Brisbane

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in most of the months except for May, June, August and September. A closer look at the line graph clearly shows that

Canberra

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and

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Brisbane

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minimum

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temperature

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temperatures

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similar

trend

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. The former started at 10

Celsius

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degree

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and decreased significantly to nearly 0

Celsius

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degree

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in August before

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back to over 10

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degree

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degrees

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by the end of the

year

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. The latter saw the same drop but from 15

Celsius

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degree

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to under 10

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degree

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degrees

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then

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rose back to over 15

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degree

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degrees

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in December. The maximum

temperature

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in both

Brisbane

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and

Canberra

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started and ended the

year

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at over 25

Celsius

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degree

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,

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however

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the latter shows

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difference between summer and winter as it hit the bottom at 15

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degree

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degrees

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in July

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the former’s lowest point was just under 25

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degree

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degrees

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. Moving on the bar chart, the figure for rainy

days

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in

Brisbane

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decreased from 20 to 10

days

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in the first half of the

year

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before quickly

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to nearly 20

days

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in the other half of the

year

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. Rain pattern in

Canberra

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witnessed a fluctuation between 10 and 15

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rainy

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each

months

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month

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with July being the month with the least amount of rain.