You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There is a graph that shows the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in four different countries (the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal) between the
years
of 1967 and 2007. It can be seen that the highest emission is in the United Kingdom for all time even if it has decreased from 11
tonnes
to 9
tonnes
in 40
years
, and
this
process continues.
Additionally
, there is
also
a decrease in releasing toxic gas in Sweden after 1977 when it was top.
Moreover
, in 2007, Sweden was one of the
less
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least
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emissions calculated countries which was 5
tonnes
.
According to
the graph, Portugal is the other one which has the least producing of carbon dioxide which was
also
5
tonnes
in 2007. Portugal
also
has the least amount of emission over the 40
years
.
However
, unfortunately, the calculations show that it is increasing through the
years
.
Moreover
, the other country which has increasing value is Italy.
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