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The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015 and 2017.

The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015 and 2017.
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The provided bar chart gives information on different sources of gaining information by individuals in three different years, namely, 2013,2015 and 2017. The units are measured in the per
cents
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 of
population
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the population
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 in one particular country. Generally speaking, it is evident that television and
internet
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the internet
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 were
main
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the main
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 sources of news throughout
given
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 period,
while
 newspapers and radio lagged behind. First and foremost, in 2013 television comprised 80% of human beings who received news through
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,
while
 approximately 40% of
population
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the population
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 accessed news via printed and tangible newspapers.
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, radio and internet used via different contemporary and modern devices
plateued
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plateaued
 with 30%. With regards to two different years, 2015 and 2017, it is evident that tangible newspapers were utilized
via
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 30% of citizens, and reached the nadir with 20% after two years.
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, radio comprised 30% and remained steady.
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,
internet
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the internet
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 which is the main source of information
were
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 useful for 40% of
country
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the country
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 and faced an upward tendency with nearly 70%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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