The pie graphs show greenhouse gas emissions worldwide in 2002 and the forecast for 2030. The column chart shows carbon dioxide emissions around the world.
There is a graph that shows the release of carbon dioxide in 2002 on the left side. It can be seen that over half of the emissions are from the OECD.
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, developing countries and transition economies followed them with %38 and 10% respectively.
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, the right graph shows the expectations in 2030 for the emission of greenhouse gases. It can be said that developing countries will release more toxic gas in the near future than the OECD, Linking Words
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the OECD is decreasing the emissions. Linking Words
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, the different sectors which cause carbon dioxide emissions can be shown in the column chart. In 2002, the industry had the highest amount which was 6 billion tons, Linking Words
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the consumer and transportation sectors followed with 4 and 2 billion tons respectively. In 2030, the industry will be expected the most greenhouse gas-releasing sector with almost 11 billion tons. Linking Words
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, consumer and transportation will follow, Linking Words
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waste combustion will rarely change.Linking Words
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