There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly argued whether non-academic

subjects

such

as

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P.E.

or cookery should be eliminated from the group of compulsory

subjects

at

school

or not.

While

I acknowledge that core

subjects

are vital for

students

' future

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, I believe that non-academic

subjects

should be kept and taught at

school

. Granted, there are some justifiable reasons to say that non-academic

subjects

are often perceived as less important than core

subjects

. Chief of these is that

students

could lay the foundation that the workforce

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. Since the majority of job opportunities require fundamental knowledge,

such

as analysis and language, having

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and

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a

high-qualified

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certificate specialized in these

subjects

at

school

will make the

students

stand out other competitors at

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recruitment, resulting in higher chances of employment.

Additionally

,

students

can spend more time on important

subjects

. Removing non-academic

subjects

offers

students

more time so that they can

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their prioritized

subjects

aligned to their potential career, leading to

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and higher academic performance.

However

, these lines of reasoning are relatively flawed, as the ubiquity of technology has shared a part of

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at

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, which aids

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workplace by handling data and technical tasks that

conventionally

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done by

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, paving the way to focus more on creative and innovative jobs that technology cannot duplicate as the human ability.

Therefore

, I believe that there are more compelling reasons that

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should be adopted into

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curriculum. One key reason is that it could offer a well-rounded development. Learning artistic

subjects

could offer

students

a break from their rigorous and hectic schedule at

school

where they are able to be immersed in and relaxed through soothing melodies

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,

for example

, preventing them from being stressed and burnout.

Furthermore

, non-academic

subjects

could be potential jobs. As not all

students

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in core

subjects

, these optional

subjects

provide them

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and allow them to identify and nurture their passion for learning at

school

, leading to more diverse and inclusive outcomes. In conclusion,

although

compulsory

subjects

are admittedly significant, including non-academic ones is

also

necessary to offer a more holistic development and potential employability.