The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The map above compares an old floor structure of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks nowadays.
Overall
,
it is clear that
a lot has changed over time. A new lecture
room
had been added,
moreover
, a new cafe place had been built. Looking at the information in more detail, it is noticeable that various facilities changed,
for example
, children's books have been replaced in the opposite corner,
this
room
includes two sofas and some of the stories events will be there,
instead
of the
kid's
Fix the agreement mistake
kids's
show examples
book
room
, they build a lecture
room
.
In addition
, a new cafe
instead
of the enquiry desk. They used to have two tables before, but now they removed it so the entrance hall is empty now.
Also
, the reading
room
was replaced with a computer
room
. In the meantime, you can find the information desk in the middle between the coffee
room
and the lecture
room
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • conversion
  • reflecting
  • digital literacy
  • accessible
  • shift towards
  • community-focused
  • relocated
  • decreased demand
  • inviting
  • increased focus
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