Some people think that media have the right to publish details of people's private lives, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

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reporters and journalists always want to have information about celebrities' lives,

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, influencers think it's not right for them to be filmed or their stories published on the news. In

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essay, I'm going to discuss both views. First of all, people's lives should be privet and

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respected no matter what the condition is

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. Because we will never know if that person

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to be exposed publicly or not.

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, if a reporter has to have street interviews with people, he must ask them before filming or taking photos.

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, in some nations there are rules and regulations about public photography and for the journalist to know about what is allowed to capture with his camera.

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media

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need to have a set of advice for their workers to follow which is important in today's digital age.

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, vamos idols should already know their influence and what it means for them to be filmed in public.

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, football players sometimes refuse to have a

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with fans at events,

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which can be disappointing to their beloved fans.

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, anyone tends to agree with the fact that if you make a public appearance on social

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people will most likely will know your private details. In conclusion, if you wish for your private information to be the same,

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don't try to be vamos or have higher social status, because

media

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will always do what they do best which is find personal details.

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have the right to follow stars and write articles about them for their fans to enjoy and watch, maybe it's good for stars to accept it and move on in their lives.

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Some people think that media have the right to publish details of people's private lives, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

Your opinion

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