The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the calories consumed in several
countries
in 2003. It is clear from the chart that the United States had the highest and Indonesia had the lowest calorie consumption during the year. It is seen that
countries
in Asia relatively had lower
calories
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intake compared to the rest of the five
countries
. United States and New Zealand had high average calorie intake compared with other
countries
rating approximately 3400 cal and 3300 cal. It was followed by Spain and Mexico having a similar figure of around 2500 cal. Among
countries
in Asia, the highest was China with a figure of roughly 2000 cal. It was the same amount as India which was slightly more than 2000 cal. Somalia and Indonesia were two
countries
where people didn't take more than 2000 cal. Somalia rated 1900 cal
while
Indonesia consumed the lowest which was nearly 1700 cal.
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