The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how much consumption by citizens among different
age
groups in the UK in 2004. It is clear that
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people
spending money on food and drink has risen gradually. Also
, people
under 30 consumed the most in restaurants and hotels while
people
aged 61 to 75 years
old rated the highest on entertainment.
Expenditure citizens consumed on food and drink had an upward trend of roughly 7% for those under 30 years
old and age
more than 75 years
old rating around 23%.
On the other hand
, the percentage of restaurants and hotels had a large fluctuation. Under 30 years
old had the highest proportion nearly 14% while
the lowest was 61 to 75 years
old which was approximately 2%. Age
among 31 to 45 and 46 to 60 had the same figure of roughly 13% which had a slight difference compared to age
under 30 years
old.
However
, people
under 30 rated the lowest at 7% followed by age
31 to 45 which was roughly 8%. Age
from 61 years
old to 75 years
old reached the peak at approximately 23% which was the highest proportion of the entire chart.Submitted by wjddbs2206 on
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