The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the proportion of audience enjoying
television
and
radio
during different time frames throughout the day, from October to December of 1992, in the UK. The audience includes
people
above the age of four.
Overall
,
radio
is the popular choice in the morning,
whereas
television
is preferred in the evening from 5 pm until midnight.
Moreover
, a higher fraction of the
population
prefers watching
television
, in comparison to listening to the
radio
. Early in the morning, around 6 am about 6% of
people
start listening to the
radio
, and the number gradually increases to about 28% around 9 am.
This
is the peak time for
radio
listeners, and
following
this
, the audience keeps slowly decreasing with about 12% of
people
listening around 4 pm, and
finally
reaching 1% at 2 am.
On the contrary
, the
population
of the UK starts watching
television
after 6am. There is about 7%
population
enjoying it at around 7 am
Although
the statistics dip a little to 5% around 11 am, there is a significant surge with approximately 56% of
people
enjoying
television
shows at 7 pm. As the night progresses, the fraction gradually decreases to about 1% at 3 am. In conclusion, a vast majority of
people
residing in the UK enjoy watching
television
, preferably in the second half of the day.
In contrast
,
radio
is preferred during the first half of the day, by a rather small
population
.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words television, radio, people, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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