Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In over to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behaviors. Do you agree or disagree.

In recent years a lot of

immigrants

have left their countries and travelled to Western countries looking for better jobs and lifestyles. In

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essay I will be talking about both views of argument,

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I tend to disagree with saying

immigrants

should adapt to local customs and codes of

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. First of all, people travel to great economic nations for better living conditions. And they have their own culture and habits from their traditional

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,

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asking them to convert.

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, western movements

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encourage

to

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free

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from

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religion and morals which lead to weak and fragile societies.

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,

immigrants

don't need

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customs and codes, as they

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good things

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them

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to keep.

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, what they can bring to

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industry from all

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of yummy food and vegetables.

On the other hand

, some say they should adapt and forget about bringing food culture or social habits to

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their

towns and cities. I think it's a bit racist as it consists of limiting their lifestyle and

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them be suppressed. But why

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afraid of people's beliefs if it's not affecting anyone and

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not have

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sides

.

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Countries that accept

immigrants

have to allow

immigrants

to live happily and don't push their agendas against them. In conclusion, humans have been always living together from the beginning and need to

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be

communicating better for own good of humanity.

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future generations will get the impact from their grandfathers and grandmothers. In the end, more tolerance needs to be present in our world.