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The graph and the chart below show the numer of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and the chart below show the numer of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart delineates student enrollment in various subjects, categorized by gender, in a university in the year 2012. On the whole, it can be seen that Social Sciences is by far the most popular subject among others,
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 the opposite is true for agriculture.
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, the total number of
students
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 participating in Health, Humanities and Science and Math are relatively similar.
To begin
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 with, there was an astounding number of 7000
students
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 taking part in Social Sciences in the surveyed university,
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 which 4000 are female
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, though Engineering is the second-most popular subject, it proved interesting mainly to male
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, with over 2000
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 in the total 3000 being male. As to Agriculture, only around 500
students
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 chose it as their major. Regarding Health and Humanities, they shared similar student attendance and gender distribution, with approximately 2000
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 in total and the figures for males doubling those of males.
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, though attracting the approximate quantity of
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, Science and math are a more popular choice among boys, with 1300 male
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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