The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comaprisions where relevant.
The charts show the
allocation
of police
budget
and the table illustrate
where the Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrates
budget
came from for 2017 and 2018. Overall
, there was an incremental of total
Correct article usage
the total
police
budget
from 2017 to 2018 and there was also
a change in the allocation
of the budget
, especially in technology
sector and salaries.
Looking at the table, Correct article usage
the technology
total
Correct article usage
the total
police
budget
was
increased from 304.7 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
in 2017 to 318.6 million
in the next year
because two main sources, national
government and local tax, contributed more money in 2018 than Correct article usage
the national
last
year
, where the former increase
their Wrong verb form
increased
allocation
around 2 million
and the latter gave more almost 10 million
in 2018 compared to the previous year
. As a result
, the total budget
in 2018 rose approximately
12 Change preposition
by approximately
million
compared to the budget
in 2017.
Moreover
, the budget
utilisation was also
changed where 14% of total
Correct article usage
the total
police
budget
were
allocated for technology in 2018, 5% bigger than the previous Correct subject-verb agreement
was
year
. As a result
, the budget
allocation
for salaries was
decreasedUnnecessary verb
apply
6
% in 2018 compared to Change preposition
by 6
allocation
in 2017. Meanwhile, the Correct article usage
the allocation
budget
allocation
for building and transport had same
percentage in 2017 and 2018, which was 17% of Change the article
the same
total
Add an article
the total
budget
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Vocabulary: Replace the words allocation, police, budget, million, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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