The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in 5 European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given tables display the sale figures for both
coffee
and bananas that were labelled by Fairtrade in five Caucasian countires
, namely, the United Kingdom, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden. The data compares the sales of 1999 to those of 5 years later.
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countries
Overall
, based on the data, the coffee
sale
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sales
figues
increased in all Correct your spelling
figures
countires
, Correct your spelling
countries
while
those of bananas demonstrated an increase in some countires
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countries
,
and a decrease in others.
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apply
of
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on
coffee
sales with more depth, the United Kingdom demonstrates the highest surge within a five year
duration, jumping from 1.5 Add a hyphen
five-year
million
in 1999 to 20 million
in 2004. Moreover
, Switzerland marks the second highest
increase in Add a hyphen
second-highest
coffee
sales, marking a 3 million
increase during the same time period. Other European countries such
as Sweden, Denmark, and Belgium all experiened
a similar growth of under one Correct your spelling
experienced
million
each.
On the other hand
, the sale
figures for bananas showed a wider variation. Fix the agreement mistake
sales
For instance
, Switzerland displayed a remarkable and dramatic growth of over 30 million
euros, while
the UK and Belgium both increased by approximately 4 million
, more or less. However
, Sweden and Denmark both decreased by about 1 million
each.Submitted by nareesakbar on
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