The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives information about how
plastic
bottles
are recycled.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is a cyclic process that consists of four main stages: collecting, crushing, transforming into raw material, and producing goods to reuse.
The cyclic process commences with collecting used plastic
bottles
in bins, after which these bottles
are transported by trucks to the recycling centre. In the recycling centre, bottles
are sorted and compressed into blocks.
After compressing, these blocks are crushed by a machine into small pieces, which are washed in liquid. In the next step, crushed and washed small pieces of plastic
bottles
are transformed into plastic
pellets by a machine. This
machine also
heats pellets to form plastic
raw material. Finally
, the raw material can be used to make reusable goods such
as bottles
, pens, and shopping bags. These products can be recycled again.Submitted by writingiletschecker on
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