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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram gives information about how
plastic
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bottles
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 are recycled. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is a cyclic process that consists of four main stages: collecting, crushing, transforming into raw material, and producing goods to reuse. The cyclic process commences with collecting used
plastic
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bottles
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 in bins, after which these
bottles
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 are transported by trucks to the recycling centre. In the recycling centre,
bottles
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 are sorted and compressed into blocks. After compressing, these blocks are crushed by a machine into small pieces, which are washed in liquid. In the next step, crushed and washed small pieces of
plastic
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bottles
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 are transformed into
plastic
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 pellets by a machine.
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 machine
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 heats pellets to form
plastic
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 raw material.
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, the raw material can be used to make reusable goods
such
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 as
bottles
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, pens, and shopping bags. These products can be recycled again.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling process
  • collection stage
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • type and quality
  • recyclable plastics
  • contaminants
  • cleaned
  • shredded
  • plastic flakes
  • melted down
  • pellets
  • beads
  • raw material
  • manufacture
  • new products
  • distribution
  • completing the recycling loop
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