The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts the proportion of people's behaviour who do not have any occupations in the UK
last
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year.
Overall
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, unemployed female predominantly spent their time on daily chores both in the morning and the afternoon,
whereas
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men mostly spent their time
for
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job hunting in the morning and leisure activities afterwards. 22% of unemployed
male
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males
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sought
for
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apply
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a job in the morning
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the number is followed by shopping with 20% and housework with 19%. Only
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percentage of those people spent their time in the morning for unproductive behaviours,
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as drinking with 2% and sitting around.
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, the proportion
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categories of leisure activities moderately increased in the afternoon; 14% of them were watching TV and 13% were working
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their gardens. Almost half of the unemployed women were doing housework in the morning. 26% and 16% of them were
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shopping and finding employment, respectively. Housework continued to be the largest portion for the female in the afternoon with 21%.
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percentage was followed by 17% with both shopping and visiting friends.
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