The maps below show the changes in a café from ten years ago to now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes in a café from ten years ago to now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The three maps illustrate how a café was developed during the
last
ten
years
. Its general components remained the same, except for an expansion in the terrace area, replacement of
tables
and addition of a new counter. Ten
years
ago, two terraces were sitting near each side of the entrance. After entering the ground, customers could see a cash desk on the right and eight round
tables
were placed at the centre in a cycle. The food preparation area and toilets were located at the left and
right hand
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side of the end of the café, separately. Five
years
ago, its owner allocated two oval
tables
at each of the terraces. Customers were able to sit
at
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outside of the shop. During the
last
five
years
, the terraces have been extended and doubled in size. Now both of them can contain two oval desks at the same time. Four wide square
tables
were purchased and serve as a replacement for the round table in the middle.
Furthermore
, a counter was added between the cash desk and the toilets.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, tables with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 5 times.
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