The maps below show the changes in a café from ten years ago to now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The three maps illustrate how a café was developed during the

last

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ten

years

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. Its general components remained the same, except for an expansion in the terrace area, replacement of

tables

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and addition of a new counter. Ten

years

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ago, two terraces were sitting near each side of the entrance. After entering the ground, customers could see a cash desk on the right and eight round

tables

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were placed at the centre in a cycle. The food preparation area and toilets were located at the left and

right hand

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side of the end of the café, separately. Five

years

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ago, its owner allocated two oval

tables

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at each of the terraces. Customers were able to sit

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outside of the shop. During the

last

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five

years

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, the terraces have been extended and doubled in size. Now both of them can contain two oval desks at the same time. Four wide square

tables

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were purchased and serve as a replacement for the round table in the middle.

Furthermore

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, a counter was added between the cash desk and the toilets.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, tables with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 5 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

178 words

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