Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree of disagree ? What other measures do you think might be effective ?
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petrol
price
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prices
traffic
and pollution problems
. Many of them believe it is irrelevant. In my view, it will play a big role to
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cost
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higher and harsher to many.
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raise
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they will try to fulfil their needs.
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price
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prices
reduce
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and reduce
pollutions
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traffic
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without care about the environment.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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task achievement
The essay discusses relevant points but lacks depth in some areas. To improve task achievement, consider providing more detailed examples and explanations to support your points.
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introduction conclusion present
The conclusion effectively summarizes the main points discussed in the essay.
complete response
The essay addresses the task by discussing both the increase in petrol price and suggesting another measure (promoting electric transports).