The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart provides key information about the registration rate of international
students
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in three different universities.
Overall
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, it can be said that Indian learners, generally, represent the majority of international
students
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. By far, the
University
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of Riverview has the highest level of registration, with the opposite of
this
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being true for Earlwood
University
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. As far as the number of learners is concerned, the
University
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of Riverview hit the highest peak with nearly 7500. Smithtown
University
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came in the second rank with 6000
students
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at its highest and approximately 1000 at its lowest. Just under that amount, Earlwood
University
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witnessed the least amount of people's enrollment at approximately 5000 and 1000
by contrast
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. when it comes to the nations that have the largest amount of
students
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, India has the first highest in the ranking. Following that, Nebal and Vietnam showed almost approximate data in individuals attending
of
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these particular schools.
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, we can see that Indonesians and Colombians stayed at the bottom rank of the graph in which they tend to
enroll
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less in those study programs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, university with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrolment trends
  • steady increase
  • fluctuating enrolments
  • international student numbers
  • comparative analysis
  • favored choice
  • global economic conditions
  • admission policies
  • program offerings
  • student satisfaction
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