The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts indicate
air
pollution
levels
in 2021 separate from four different countries and have three main reasons industry
, transport and electricity
generation
.
Overall
, it is clear to see that China has the highest air
pollution
levels
with problems of industry
as well as
in
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Japan
that have the same reasons for air
pollution
. However
, America
has a levels
pollution
lower than China but more than two countries with problems of transport. Alternatively, Australia has lower levels
of air
pollution
than another three countries.
To begin
with, China as mentioned on top land has peak levels
of air
pollution
of close to 60% of electricity
generation
, 70% of transportation and 80% which is five times more than Australia. Meanwhile, air
pollution
in Australia there
is the same factor where the total average of Correct pronoun usage
apply
electricity
generation
, transportation and industry
is around 20% of all.
On the other hand
, America
has levels
of pollution
from transport close to 60% while
Japan
has only 20% this
percentage is the same as the levels
of industry
in America
. Furthermore
, the number of electricity
generation
in America
is 30% more than in Japan
around two times 15% and the level of industry
in Japan
is 45% more than in America
when compared.Submitted by np.napatping on
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