The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
The flow chart illustrates the way how biofuel called ethanol
manufactured
.
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is manufactured
Overall
, there are 9 stages in the whole Linking Words
fuel producing
process, beginning with energy produced from sunlight and Add a hyphen
fuel-producing
carbon
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dioxide
and ending with releasing Use synonyms
carbon
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dioxide
from different Use synonyms
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
transports
.
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transport
To begin
with, the energy which consists Linking Words
from
sunlight and Change preposition
of
carbon
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dioxide
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consumed by
absorbed by plants and trees to growVerb problem
is
up
. Change preposition
apply
Then
, the grown crops are harvested by huge Linking Words
tractor
. Fix the agreement mistake
tractors
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this
, the harvested crops are passed through Linking Words
pre-processing
machine which Add an article
a pre-processing
break
up Change the verb form
breaks
it
into small pieces until the cellulose has been produced. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Next,
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processing
cellulose with chemical elements in Verb problem
apply
laboratory
are manufactured sugars which main Add an article
the laboratory
a laboratory
component
of producing ethanol. Fix the agreement mistake
components
Following
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this
, microbes are added to the sugar, and Linking Words
this
mixture is turned into biofuel.Linking Words
Finally
, the ethanol consumed by planes, lorries and cars Linking Words
which are producing
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produces
carbon
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dioxide
and Use synonyms
recycling
the process again.Wrong verb form
recycles
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