The line graph and pie charts show the cost for watching films and choices of people's of watching movies.
The line
graph
and pie charts show the cost for
watching films and Change preposition
of
choices
of Correct article usage
the choices
people's
Change noun form
people
of
watching movies.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, what stands out from the line graph
is that all options saw an upward trend over a six-year period. What stands out from the pie chart is that renting a DVD
was the most popular category in 2005, but by 2011 it was replaced by legal downloading.
Looking at the line graph
, cinema tickets started at 9, and by 2011, figures saw a gradual increase to 14. Legal download began at 7, after which it witnessed a sharp decrease by 4, and then
it grew considerably to 9. DVD
saw a moderate growth from 6 to 8.
Regarding the pie charts, in 2005, renting a DVD
was the number-one category on the list, which accounted for over half of the graph
, while
legal download contains only half of a
one-tenth. Correct article usage
apply
However
, in 2011, renting a DVD
declined significantly to one quarter, while
the latter boomed to 56%. Nevertheless
, figures
Correct article usage
the figures
of
going to Change preposition
for
cinema
halved, from 36% to 18%.Correct article usage
the cinema
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