The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.
The two maps illustrate the compass of a
school
in 2004 and the anticipated plan for the development of the school
site over the next 200 years.
Overall
, what stands out from the maps is that whereas
the school
site used to be a quiet playground for students
, it will be developed in terms of buildings, facilities and roads, and the number of students
will also
approximately double.
In 2004, there was only one car
park
in the north-west of the school
site where the main entrance to the school
was located; this
car
park
will remain in 2024. In 2004 there were two school
buildings, accommodating 600 students
, there are plans for building the third one in the place of the sports field to accommodate 1000 students
in 2024, and school
buildings 1 and 2 will be joined together.
A new car
park
will be erected in the north-east of the school
playground. In the south of the second car
park
, a part of woodland will be removed to build a sports field. In 2024, a road will be constructed from the south of the main entrance to the second car
park
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