You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the number of read
books
by both genders at The Burnaby Public Library the
Change preposition
in the
period
between 2011 to 2014.
Overall
, it is apparent that women read more books
compared to men
at the beginning of the given period
whilst men
read more than women by a huge difference at the end
of the period
.
Regarding females, they began in 2011 reading at
around 5,000 Change preposition
apply
books
exceeding males. The line rose steadily till it reached a peak in 2013 with a value of 10,000 books
and declined progressively ending the period
with 8,000 books
in 2014.
Turning to men
, they started in 2011 at roughly 3,000 books
, then
the line showed a dramatic grow
in 2012 resulting Replace the word
growth
that
in 2013 the Correct word choice
apply
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
books
read by men
was much higher than those read by women. In 2014, males read more than females with just above 11,000 books
which was the biggest gap between both genders during the given time frame.Submitted by remasalotaibi678 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, period, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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