You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the number of read
books
by both genders at The Burnaby Public Library
the
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period
between 2011 to 2014.
Overall
, it is apparent that women read more
books
compared to
men
at the beginning of the given
period
whilst
men
read more than women by a huge difference
at the end
of the
period
. Regarding females, they began in 2011 reading
at
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around 5,000
books
exceeding males. The line rose steadily till it reached a peak in 2013 with a value of 10,000
books
and declined progressively ending the
period
with 8,000
books
in 2014. Turning to
men
, they started in 2011 at roughly 3,000
books
,
then
the line showed a dramatic
grow
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in 2012 resulting
that
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in 2013 the
numbers
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of
books
read by
men
was much higher than those read by women. In 2014, males read more than females with just above 11,000
books
which was the biggest gap between both genders during the given time frame.
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