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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates data regarding the production levels of three distinct main fuels in the UK from 1981 to 2001.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
energy
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units
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 of coal experienced an apparent downward tendency,
while
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 the figure for
petroleum
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 and natural gas showed a noticeable increase throughout the period. Notably, the manufacturing of
petroleum
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 contributed to the most
energy
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units
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 among the three fuels for 20 years. Looking at the diagram in more detail, in 1981, nearly 90
energy
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units
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 of
petroleum
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 were produced in the UK, which was approximately 10
energy
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units
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 more than that of coal. Over the following decade, the production level of
petroleum
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 increased first by about 50
energy
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units
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 and
then
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 fell to around 100
energy
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units
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,
whereas
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 the counterpart of coal decreased first by 42
energy
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units
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 and
then
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 rose to almost 56
energy
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units
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.
In addition
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, the manufactured natural gas remained relatively stable, with the amount being 40
energy
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units
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 for ten years.
According to
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 the graph, the number of the produced
petroleum
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 went up from 100
energy
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units
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 in 1991 to 140
energy
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units
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 in 2000.
In contrast
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, coal, whose production level ranked second among these fuels until 1991, saw a continuous decrement of nearly 20
energy
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units
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at the end
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 of the period. Simultaneously, the corresponding figure for natural gas witnessed dramatic growth, with the number ascending to 100
energy
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units
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 in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, units, petroleum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fuel production
  • Trend
  • Steady
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant
  • Milestones
  • Turning point
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Evolve
  • Notable
  • Summarize
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