The chart and table below given information about tourist at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below given information about tourist at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented pie chart and table compare data about special holiday resorts that are for Australian tourists.
Overall
, it is important that Earoupian who visit
Australia
spend more time in it
while
the
Asian
which has the massive number of tourists spend less time than other continents inhabitants.
According to
the diagrams, most Australian tourists are from Asia ar37%;
however
,
this
Asian
population prefer to stay in 5-star hotels for a week and they travel to
Australia
for sightseeing. Europe, the second one for the figure of passengers by 35%, citizens have a large staying of 16 days;
additionally
, they choose either camping or caravan for accommodation and most of them select
Australia
for not only swimming but
also
sunbathing. The pictures demonstrate that Americans, who are the third travellers by nearly half of
Asian
passengers, spend two weeks at 4-star hotels in
Australia
;
furthermore
, their initial selection in
this
country is the same as
Asian
people. The
last
one is Others, which have 10% of communities that have journey to
Australia
;
Moreover
, their length of stay is 10 days in places that same as European societies.
In addition
, they designed
this
country for surfing.
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