A friend has written to you ask you how your IELTS studies are going . write a letter telling your friend how you are preparing for the test . -Say what progress you are making -Explain how you are preparing for the test -Say which section you are finding difficult
Dear Peter,
I
red
your letter a few days ago andCorrect your spelling
read
that asking
how about my IELTS studies, and I'Wrong verb form
asked
m
so sorry that I can not answer your letter directly, because I'm
quiet
busy Correct your spelling
quite
this
week.
to be honest my IELTS studies is
still stuck, especially in Correct subject-verb agreement
are
writing
Add an article
the writing
section
. I'
Change the verb form
I'm still confused
m
still confuse in
how to improve the given topic. I think it's difficult for me to Change preposition
about
enroll
Change the spelling
enrol
the
test soonChange preposition
on the
,
because Remove the comma
apply
writing
Correct article usage
the writing
section
is very
crucial Correct article usage
a very
section
if I'm
still not ready. I think I have to increase my writing section
before taking test
Correct article usage
the test
scedule
. I hope that you can give me some advice on how to improve my writing Correct your spelling
schedule
section
.
All the best,
ClaudiaSubmitted by arniaqlina44 on
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coherence cohesion
Avoid minor grammatical mistakes and improper syntax to improve readability.
task achievement
Be sure to answer all parts of the prompt comprehensively. You need to elaborate more on the progress and preparation methods.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for the context of writing to a friend.
greeting and closing
Proper greeting and closing were used, which fits the context of a letter to a friend.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.