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The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030
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The line graph depicts how many
people
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 in the UK travel on a daily basis by
car
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, bus or
train
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 from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that there is an upward trend in
car
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 and
train
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 usage throughout the period.
Furthermore
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, the number of
people
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 using the bus falls gradually. In 1970, the most popular means of transportation was a
car
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 and around 5
million
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people
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 used the
car
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 to commute.
This
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 year, about 2
million
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 individuals used the
train
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 to commute, less than the other two means of transport. For the next 30 years, the
figure
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 for
car
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 usage saw a significant rise and reached around 7
million
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,
while
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 the number of
people
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 commuting by
train
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 climbed to only 3
million
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. It is anticipated that the
figure
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 for
car
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 usage will have increased to 9
million
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people
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 by 2030. By 2030 approximately 5
million
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people
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 will have used
train
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 to travel. At the beginning of the period, only 4
million
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 individuals used the bus to travel.
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,
this
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figure
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 witnessed a gradual decrease in 2000 and dropped to nearly 2
million
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. The anticipation indicates that
this
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figure
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 will decrease to just under 3
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, car, train, million, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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