The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters 

travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030
The line graph depicts how many
people
in the UK travel on a daily basis by
car
, bus or
train
from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that there is an upward trend in
car
and
train
usage throughout the period.
Furthermore
, the number of
people
using the bus falls gradually. In 1970, the most popular means of transportation was a
car
and around 5
million
people
used the
car
to commute.
This
year, about 2
million
individuals used the
train
to commute, less than the other two means of transport. For the next 30 years, the
figure
for
car
usage saw a significant rise and reached around 7
million
,
while
the number of
people
commuting by
train
climbed to only 3
million
. It is anticipated that the
figure
for
car
usage will have increased to 9
million
people
by 2030. By 2030 approximately 5
million
people
will have used
train
to travel. At the beginning of the period, only 4
million
individuals used the bus to travel.
Moreover
,
this
figure
witnessed a gradual decrease in 2000 and dropped to nearly 2
million
. The anticipation indicates that
this
figure
will decrease to just under 3
million
.
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