The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the total number of inquiries of
tourist
received by Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
Tourist
Information Office during six months in 2011.
Correct article usage
the Tourist
Overall
, it can be seen that the
communication methods both in person and by telephone Correct article usage
apply
had
risen considerably. Wrong verb form
have
By contrast
, written inquiries continued falling over a
period shown.
In January 2011, Correct article usage
the
directly
contact was around 400 reports. Change the word
direct
Whereas
, telephone accounted for slightly over twofold as in person. These two types had extremely increased to respective almost 2000 and slightly below 1600 in June. In addition
, trends for using telephone
to contact the tourist officers seemed Add an article
the telephone
a telephone
went
up fluctuatively. Change the verb form
to go
While
,
personal asking rose significantly.
Written information from visitors went down month by month during a six-month period. In the initial month, which was January, there were about 700 travellers sending messages to the authority. Remove the comma
apply
However
, in June, only roughly 400 people did this
way. This
shown
a massive decrease and became the latest option to communicate with visitor officers.Wrong verb form
showed
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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