The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
The line graph illustrates various types of sources of air pollutants found in
UK
from 1990 to 2005.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, there were three major sources including transport
system, operation of industry and Correct article usage
the transport
households
. Industrial sectors accounted for the highest production of pollutions
followed by transportation and Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
households
.
In 1990, there were slightly 6 million
tonnes
of air pollutions
released by a massive activity of industry. Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
However
, this
condition dropped significantly by roughly 2 million
tonnes
in 2005 or threefold lower than 15 years beforehand. This
caused massive
Correct article usage
a massive
decreased
in terms of Replace the word
decrease
total
amount of air pollution in Add an article
the total
UK
. Correct article usage
the UK
In addition
, around 7 million
tonnes
of pollutions
Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
released
in Add a missing verb
were released
UK
in 1990 and by 2005, only about 3 Correct article usage
the UK
million
tonnes
produced
by industry.
Transportation and Add a missing verb
were produced
households
had reverse trends. In the initial year which was 1990, the total proportion of both was same
Correct article usage
the same
in
roughly 2 Change preposition
apply
million
tonnes
for
annual production of pollution. Change preposition
of
However
, in 2005, transport
system had a small Correct article usage
the transport
increased
. Replace the word
increase
By contrast
, households
had done up to around 1 million
tonnes
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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