The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The maps represent the manufacturing site in the city of Norbiton and the planned upcoming renovation of it.
Overall
, the city of Norbiton is divided into 2 parts by the river with
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connections between them. In the north of the city, on the opposite side of the river, the land is used as
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farmland.
This
area
is planned for development into residential space.
On the other hand
, in the south of the
town
, there are 8 factories.
Nevertheless
, there is no housing located in the south of the
town
.
However
, industrial plants will be demolished, the residential
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and facilities will be constructed. At the moment, in the south of the
town
, there is a roundabout with 1 exit connected
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main
road
and factory
area
. Factories are located around the roundabout and along the exit from it. In the future, a new roundabout will be built on the main
road
and linked to the old one. The
town
will be developed into
residential
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a residential
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area
. All of
factories
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will be destroyed and housing will be constructed in their place. Not only will the living buildings be developed, but
also
facilities
such
as shops, medical centre, playground, and school. To connect the north of the
town
with the south side, a bridge will be constructed. There will be a new
road
linked to the bridge. The residential buildings will be built along that
road
, and
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area
will be relocated to the east.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, town, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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